R8 New Sig I Done Did

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WITH BORDER:

 

5/10

 

I like it 7/10

 

The sig itself is very good but the set is....ew.
Overall I'd rate it an 8.5/10. Nice work

 

4/10

 

Can you give me hints to why 4? So I know what to work on

 

• Too much going on in the scene, don't know where the focal is
• Don't really like the colours, they're really dull
• Text is hard to read and doesn't look very nice in general
• Smudging isn't done very well, it's very clear where you've done it on the render and looks bad
• C4D is really out of place and doesn't really follow the 'flow'

 

holy ****

 

Here's the PSD if you wanna know how it was done