Blood Fang | White Fang's Rival Scroll [Taking Suggestions]

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  1. Vireckkk

    Vireckkk New Member

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    According to the myth, the legendary martial artist of ice had a younger brother. In jealousy, the younger brother created a style that would rival his older brother. The two fought using their signature styles, but in the end, the younger brother killed his older brother. Realizing his mistake, he locked up the scroll, never to be seen. Dark Guardian's found the tomb of the younger brother and released the scroll. Reports have shown the scroll to contain the power of Nega-Frost, a powerful element able to freeze magma. By Spooky

    Price: 1190 RC

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    PPPPP (80)(90)(95)(100,100)(150) - (615 Total) [6 Hits] {BU Launcher}
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    (if possible, add a red ice animation to PPPPP)
    KKK
    (100)(115)(295) - (510 Total) [3 Hits]
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    KKPP
    (100)(115)(95)(215) - (525 Total) [4 Hits]
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    (keep the ice animation, but make it red, not blue.)

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    - Please note this scroll is not yet finished.
    - I will now be taking suggestions for the scroll's >>G, Juggle Launcher, Grab, and Counter
    - I will add Damage Inputs soon
    - The post will be updated to look nicer

    IGN: Spooky

    Credit to:
    - SeeJest [Punch Combo]
     
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  2. Vireckkk

    Vireckkk New Member

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    If you want to suggest something for the scroll, please reply with what you want to see and put a Gif along with it.
     
  3. SeeJest

    SeeJest Bushido

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    People asking for input is always a good thing, I think so anyways. Made a quick GIF of your first combo, don't have the scroll from the second GIF thought, but yea I think you should make the long punch combo have a launcher at the end, since the hit you showed for the final is actually a launcher, pretty sure.
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    Think you can amp the damage a little as well, like
    (80)(90)(95)(100,100)(150) - (615 Total) [6 Hits]
     
  4. Vireckkk

    Vireckkk New Member

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    thanks you! it's always nice for people to help out :p
    there will be a "Credit to" section for people who contribute to this scroll!
     
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  5. Shina

    Shina Creator of Shattering Hand

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    Looks hella interesting..
    I like
     
  6. Prizmo

    Prizmo Well-Known Member

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  7. Shina

    Shina Creator of Shattering Hand

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    Had to come back and mention that eagle claws grab would fit this well.

    and that I love that punch combo so much...
     
  8. SeeJest

    SeeJest Bushido

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    Could add a KKG+K and make it the same first two kicks and make the launching kick the Dash Z from white fang, then add a Dash Z that would b like Agni's but instead of fire it's ice effect and maybe make it throw backwards instead of forwards. I'll add a GIF to show what I mean in a bit.

    The dash Z would work as the ground hit as well.
     
  9. SupWova

    SupWova Well-Known Member

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    I feel like the KG should be somewhat more different. Maybe Add KG+K for normal White Fang KG. The KG can have the same properties as Aikido's KKP combo. And for KG+P could either Choy Li Fut's grab but reverse or it can be Juri's street fighter 5 normal grab. I'll try to provide gifs/videos to everything I said.
     
  10. Draygashi

    Draygashi World Record (Al Hata), CUC

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    From the looks of this, the juggle damage will be over 1,000 which is pretty high. And that's without a ground hit, which I'm assuming you'll add either White Fang's or Shaolin Tiger's ground hit.
     
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  11. Windstorm

    Windstorm Glacial Master

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    Well, I won't be judgmental of your scroll and oh my lord what is that damag-- *cough*
    What part of White Fang are you trying to make an offshoot of?
    Spiking combos? Fence edging? Speed? Name something bruh.
    edit ; I think it'd be pretty unique to add 2 juggle launchers in one combo
    (PPPPPP)
     
  12. SacredSwordJr

    SacredSwordJr Well-Known Member

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    PPPPP (80)(90)(95)(100,100)(150) - (615 Total) [6 Hits] {BU Launcher}

    Random player with 89 str *1 PUNCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*
     
  13. KanekiKen12

    KanekiKen12 Member

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    This looks lit I would totally buy but you should bring the price down to 1050
    It's a nice scroll and I would totally buy it
     
  14. Mach9Recoded

    Mach9Recoded Active Member

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    having it similar to white fang is good, but seriously dont copy shal tiger. I dont like it when a scroll uses too many things from other scrolls and makes it into one. It's like a torn painting glued back together. The two quick kicks at the end of white fang kick combo are a must in this scroll, but other than that make it pretty unique. If it's a rival of white fang, and white fang has flashy kick combos, have the kick combos be a unique flashy style. and bring the price down. Still, ur suggestion and do what you think is best.
     
  15. SacredSwordJr

    SacredSwordJr Well-Known Member

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    Its call "Recycled" for a reason bud.
     
  16. Mach9Recoded

    Mach9Recoded Active Member

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    yeah yeah ik. I just want someone not to recycle for once but ik how hard it is because creating and executing is pretty tough.
     
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  17. Mach9Recoded

    Mach9Recoded Active Member

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    looking back at it, the shal tiger combo looks great and fits the flow of the scroll, my opinion is that it would look really cool if it was a sideways 540 kick instead. the last part of the shal tiger attack. AND since this is RF, you could do two 540 kicks and make it fast, then the last part can be a webster axe kick straight down on the opponents head. SO,
    the two five forty kicks, and instead of the claws, finish with an axe kick with ice breaking like white fang. Maybe use different ice, like blood red ice to make it a bit more different.
     
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  18. MonsieurMonk

    MonsieurMonk Well-Known Member

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    Oh seen seen.
     
  19. SacredSwordJr

    SacredSwordJr Well-Known Member

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    Everything is pretty much used lol
     
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  20. teeny

    teeny Well-Known Member

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    tfw people bump dead and unimplementable suggestions instead of the ones nimonix actually looks at :(
     

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