My first and very crappy animation

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  1. Drevius

    Drevius Comic Book Creator & Clean Up Crew

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    It's a long road from here. But it's a start I guess. Plz critique or roast the ** outta this first attempt
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    ignore the sky background file I accidently dropped it there and i dont know how to get rid of files on forums
    -nvm ty bj
     
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  2. Drevius

    Drevius Comic Book Creator & Clean Up Crew

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    honestly I really fkin hate having to go back to this style just to animate but it was the best way to start off
     
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  3. Roxica

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    Wow! really nice drawing. i think its a good start
     
  4. Controversy

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    Looks alright imo. Gives me boondocks vibes
     
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  5. Drevius

    Drevius Comic Book Creator & Clean Up Crew

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    yeah, kinda wanted a huey look. someone told me it looks like one of drakes album covers lmao
     
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    Draygashi World Record (Al Hata), CUC

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    I don't like how the bottom/back of his hair fades to bald.
     
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    his hair looks like the smoke that comes off a burning building
     
  8. rfSexy

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    The "fade" part of the haircut shouldn't move that much since the hair there isn't long enough to move like that. (It doesn't even look like it's moving to the wind because of how it moves relative to the top of the hair/longer part of the hair)

    P simple animation. Make him blink too.
     
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  9. Drevius

    Drevius Comic Book Creator & Clean Up Crew

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    that wasnt intentional actually. it was because I didnt know that i shouldve colored the first layer before duplicating it so i wouldnt have to deal with re-fading it every time and because of that each frame was off in that category.


    appreciate the feedback so far
     
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    his eyes having a seizure
    pray for him
     
  11. rfSexy

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    Photoshop?
     
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    cool
     
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  13. Yukoto

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    MmmMMMMMMMMMMMMM his stronggggg jawline. :oops::oops::oops::oops::oops:
     
  14. HumoLoco

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    nice. but its too much skippy scene.

    also that shadow around on his head back should be not happen. it's make look like out of realistic.

    but its good to start af.
     
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    Lot better than most other people on this forum are willing to do. Only real thing I find offsetting is the way his hair on the back of his neck fades in and out as it waves.
     
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    Shana Creator of Heartseeker, SF, IAS, BD & CC

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    nice

    next is to add blinking animations to the eyes and it will look super pro
     
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    You obviously arnt black... afros don't wave in the wind..
     
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  18. Drevius

    Drevius Comic Book Creator & Clean Up Crew

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    ?
    [​IMG]
     
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  19. Drevius

    Drevius Comic Book Creator & Clean Up Crew

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    yeah, i wish my lineart wasn't trash. i don't know how moxie2d pulls off his simple lineart so well. I mean I wasn't really trying to actually draw in a decent linestyle it was just to get this done but i agree with you on that part.

    @rfSexy no clip studio paint pro has an animation feature
     
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  20. Shihan

    Shihan Well-Known Member

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    A show animated by a bunch of south koreans? whats your point
     
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