The name doesnt really mesh with the scroll descrip nor styling. Are you trying to make a Capo scroll? Because the Karate grab (omni? what.) is out of place and the combos themselves generally have odd flows combined with odd inputs. Thou this does remind me a lot of Angola Capoeira. :/ Too bad the creator never moved it.
I like the concept but its disorganized, for example the sprite position looks like it should be (Punch Combo):1,5,4,3,2 (Kickcombo):1,5,2,3,4 And the grab should look something like with this configuration it flows back into the stance alot better.
The name does really suitable on the scroll description. Undemonstrative means not tending to express feelings. I am not make a capoeira scroll, but it's alike. It's based on L Lawliet where is L fought with Kira.
I really appreciate for your feedback, but I would like to add this grab. This look much like angle grab. How about this when the guy fell on the ground then the leg push off as soon as he back into the stance. You see. There's no fence combo. So instead of you can juggle them into a fence juggle at the end combo. Actually, I am not done with the combo's description.
Well I'm thankful you even considered my ideas some people don't take well to constructive criticism! Support!