The fruits of my hard work (Novice)

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  1. TheDL6Incident

    TheDL6Incident Creator of Buki

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    @tamirtov @BJJFromGJJ @Flamekiller @HumoLoco @Draygashi
    First thing's first, I'm not a pro that's been doing CG for years. I just decided to pick up on Blender since I wanna help make a game. It took me a couple of hours (whereas a pro would make it in maybe one hour) to make this one.
    I will get to finishing the facial features, eventually. All I've got to do now is sculpt out the ears, mouth, and nose. Then we're gonna paint the eyes and mouth for the expressions like how they do it in rf.

    She does look a little lumpy, but that's OK. I'll turbosmooth her and she'll be curvy. I'm a scrub so I couldn't give her the watermelon boobs so I had to go for apples instead.

    Now, with all that being said. I made this FOR FREE in a few hours. NimoniX takes a whole year just to make a player-suggested outfit, and when they finally make it, they **** it up.

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  2. TheImmortalSea

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    most of this community doesn't use Blender, so tbh we have no idea if this is impressive or not. ik you're a novice so ig keep practicing and stop posting a new thread every other day since we can't give you helpful feedback. find a forum for blender users and post it there
     
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  3. Firezilla

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    huge difference
     
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  4. TheDL6Incident

    TheDL6Incident Creator of Buki

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    Hmmm
     
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  5. HumoLoco

    HumoLoco Clean Up Crew

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    Since we cant give you a good ******* advice. We still have art community somewhere in here. so sdfu, my little son.


    shhhh cuz you gonna hurt him :<
     
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  6. NJSmasher

    NJSmasher Comic Book Creator & Clean Up Crew

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    The legs and the head seem fine, though the torso and the arms for sure need some reworking.

    The stomach goes below the waist, the spine curves a little too much, and what I assume to be the breast seem off (like i'm not sure if the rounded parts are supposed to be nipples or the breasts thenselves)

    The arms also seem a little too short and thin,

    It seems competent enough though,seeing as you're still learning. I can't be too harsh (I can't do any better myself anyways).
     
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  7. Phawnix

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  8. tamirtov

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    It's kinda weird
     
  9. Flamekiller

    Flamekiller Glacial Master & Clean Up Crew

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    Top area needs work.
     
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  11. Phawnix

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    LMAO that post in Story Teller was worth it tho
     
  12. GracieVeterano

    GracieVeterano Well-Known Member

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    i was actually making a serious story inspired by BloobPS4exclusivesMadeMeWaste$400 and some chinese anime book thing about ancient chinese war gods and kings and ****
    ** u
     
  13. Phawnix

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    It's martial law up in here...
     
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  14. Deltro

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    The legs and the head are okay enough, you just need to work on the entire top half, the model's posture, and making the feet a tad wider.
     
  15. rfSexy

    rfSexy Art Potato & Clean Up Crew

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    Uh is this a test? Should I bother critiquing?
     
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    you can bother to critiquing it. so he can learn the hard way tho :>
     
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