Signatures (Give Feedback)

So I just got back into Photoshop and want to know how I can improve my signatures, thanks.
(Newest Signatures) 2016-10-20

 

I like the second. Very cool

 

Thank you

 

Second one doesn't look to bad, needs some fixing..

First one ....

EDIT:

Went through and made some fixes
I can give you the psd. if you want.

and I'm not near the best or good enough, so in its not "PRO" i'm still learning aswell.

 

But overall, really nice

 

A psd of that would be nice, thanks
The signature looks so much more complete now

 

Here ya go man
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B9kWTU4Rlq8OMUxSVVptNVAtYkk

I love to see others learning GFX

 

Am i allowed to critique this and not have to sound nice when i do it?

 

1st amendment af.

 

Why not? I'm not **** hurt..

But I may say, can you critique my actual art also instead of what I (attempted) to fix :0

That would be most appreciated, critiques only tell me my flaws, which can be built up and fixed.

 

For about five seconds, I thought you were Tiny, because the sig and such

 

BJJ u swallow and your illegal alien IRL

 

that would be a nightmare
imagine this thing after u 24 hrs a day

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but n0
i am not the tiny *****
dicks out tho

 

LMAO

 

my waifu protect me from the dangers of reality

 

ur 20 seconds into nhaa + chill and "she" gives u this look

wyd

 

"o sry i thougt u were afk"