Description: "Black Omega is a scroll that was designed to compliment the Alchemist-crafted ExoCore Alpha White. The purpose of this scroll is to build up muscle and strengthen bones to be as strong as metal. Getting that strong will take years and years of hard work and training. Black Omega focuses on striking your target with fast and powerful hit movements. -SacredSword" Credit goes to @TheDL6Incident Personal Description: Hopefully this scroll is balanced and the PPPKK not so over powering.If not please give me feedbacks Combo Insert Price 990rc Stance Description: Guard (Same as boxing's guard) Counter Knockback [221] Damage Description: This is a quick counter with a cool counter stance, it is not a long counter like Hunter or Another Serpent's counter.This is counter is similar to Liberty's dash Z, but instead it'll just short cut to the grab. Grab [230] Damage Description: Similar to Alpha White's B skill. But instead Nimonix will cut out the dash and short cut it to the grab.Please nerf the grab to not be so high as the actual exocore b skill.Also add a little more speed to the grab. So it might be as long as the actual exocore skill
Knockback 80,91,97,108 [376] Total damage Description: Fence edger 80,91,97,110,25,30 [433] Total damage Description: 4th hit will send the target into the air*Not a secondary launcher*.Last hit is a auto insert.
Knockback 90,98,103,111 [402] Total damage Description: 90,115 [205] Total damage Description: This combo can angle perfectly.(Add a flashy image with the last hit)
90,126 [216] Total damage Description: It'll be like Asura's counter, if possible please reanimate the wind to a fire wind - If possible ! 201/156 Description: This combo will act as a ground hit and a knockback if the target is standing.(Please add broken rock animation instead of fire)
Overall Speed Level Moderate Overall Delay Level Good Overall Angle Level Moderate Overall Recovery Level Moderate
"Black Omega is a scroll that was designed to compliment the Alchemist-crafted ExoCore Alpha White. The purpose of this scroll is to build up muscle and strengthen bones to be as strong as metal. Getting that strong will take years and years of hard work and training. Black Omega focuses on striking your target with fast and powerful hit movements. -SacredSword" ^ There, I fixed up the grammar and structure a bit in your scroll description. I also did a little editing as a suggestion in terms of the scroll's name, but it's really your scroll so do as you please. Anyways so far so good. Keep tweaking it until you think it's perfect and make it easier for the devs to understand what goes where. Good luck with your scroll
Yknow what I'm gonna flip-flop because I just saw this in a different light (red). I'd buy a re-imagined Koroshu so this is what I would do but do as you will. If youre gonna use Terry you should double down with more Terry, more Koroshu synergy and build a descrip to make Whoever Color (Omega Red is an Xmen character ) to be this badass who made this scroll instead of an exo like the others because he doesnt/cant exo or some **** whatever. Switch punch 3-4 since it's actually a knockback on other scrolls then switch to Terry's version like on your KP to build synergy within your own scroll i.e. BWN's PPP{P} + K{P} Instead of using Alpha White's skill which is a 500dmg exo skill why not come up with something new that's still robust like that? Example. You could even build synergy by adding red energy effects to certain ****. You get the idea. Go for broke.
Oh and "Whoever Color (Omega Red is an Xmen character ) to be this badass who made this scroll instead of an exo like the others because he doesnt/cant exo or some **** whatever." damn I wish could read that english.Who ever that badass is I hope he see this statement and hope he realize he a badass