Black Omega

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  1. Yes papi

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  2. Naw papi

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  1. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    Description:
    "Black Omega is a scroll that was designed to compliment the Alchemist-crafted ExoCore Alpha White. The purpose of this scroll is to build up muscle and strengthen bones to be as strong as metal. Getting that strong will take years and years of hard work and training. Black Omega focuses on striking your target with fast and powerful hit movements. -SacredSword"
    Credit goes to @TheDL6Incident



    Personal Description:
    Hopefully this scroll is balanced and the PPPKK not so over powering.If not please give me feedbacks :)



    Combo Insert
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    Price
    990rc


    Stance
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    Description:


    Guard
    (Same as boxing's guard)


    Counter
    Knockback
    [221] Damage
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    Description:
    This is a quick counter with a cool counter stance, it is not a long counter like Hunter or Another Serpent's counter.This is counter is similar to Liberty's dash Z, but instead it'll just short cut to the grab.

    Grab
    [230] Damage
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    Description:
    Similar to Alpha White's B skill. But instead Nimonix will cut out the dash and short cut it to the grab.Please nerf the grab to not be so high as the actual exocore b skill.Also add a little more speed to the grab. So it might be as long as the actual exocore skill
     
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  2. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    [​IMG]
    Knockback
    80,91,97,108 [376] Total damage
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    Description:


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    Fence edger
    80,91,97,110,25,30 [433] Total damage
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    Description:
    4th hit will send the target into the air*Not a secondary launcher*.Last hit is a auto insert.
     
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  3. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    [​IMG]
    Knockback
    90,98,103,111 [402] Total damage
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    Description:


    [​IMG]
    90,115 [205] Total damage
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    Description:
    This combo can angle perfectly.(Add a flashy image with the last hit)
     
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  4. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    [​IMG]
    90,126 [216] Total damage
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    Description:
    It'll be like Asura's counter, if possible please reanimate the wind to a fire wind - If possible !

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    201/156
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    Description:
    This combo will act as a ground hit and a knockback if the target is standing.(Please add broken rock animation instead of fire)
     
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  5. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    Overall Speed Level
    Moderate

    Overall Delay Level
    Good

    Overall Angle Level
    Moderate

    Overall Recovery Level
    Moderate
     
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  6. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    I think the run z isnt necessary what do u think?
     
  7. HumoLoco

    HumoLoco Clean Up Crew

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    support af
     
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  8. Cookiez

    Cookiez Active Member

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    I like this.
    Support.
     
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  9. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    bump
     
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  10. TheDL6Incident

    TheDL6Incident Creator of Buki

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    "Black Omega is a scroll that was designed to compliment the Alchemist-crafted ExoCore Alpha White. The purpose of this scroll is to build up muscle and strengthen bones to be as strong as metal. Getting that strong will take years and years of hard work and training. Black Omega focuses on striking your target with fast and powerful hit movements. -SacredSword"

    ^ There, I fixed up the grammar and structure a bit in your scroll description. I also did a little editing as a suggestion in terms of the scroll's name, but it's really your scroll so do as you please.

    Anyways so far so good. Keep tweaking it until you think it's perfect and make it easier for the devs to understand what goes where. Good luck with your scroll
     
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  11. Shina

    Shina Creator of Shattering Hand

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  12. Tengu

    Tengu Creator of Savate

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    Too much recycled Koroshu and Fearless for my tastes.
     
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  13. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    Find me some un recycled punch or kick move please
     
  14. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    Thanks I'll make sure to credit u as well if u would like.Make sure to vote tho mate :)
     
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  15. Tengu

    Tengu Creator of Savate

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    Yknow what I'm gonna flip-flop because I just saw this in a different light (red). I'd buy a re-imagined Koroshu so this is what I would do but do as you will.

    • If youre gonna use Terry you should double down with more Terry, more Koroshu synergy and build a descrip to make Whoever Color (Omega Red is an Xmen character :confused:) to be this badass who made this scroll instead of an exo like the others because he doesnt/cant exo or some **** whatever.
    • Switch punch 3-4 since it's actually a knockback on other scrolls then switch to Terry's version like on your KP to build synergy within your own scroll i.e. BWN's PPP{P} + K{P}
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    • Instead of using Alpha White's skill which is a 500dmg exo skill why not come up with something new that's still robust like that? Example. You could even build synergy by adding red energy effects to certain ****.
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    You get the idea. Go for broke.
     
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  16. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    thanks for the ideal dude
     
  17. Tengu

    Tengu Creator of Savate

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    Older version was better but best of luck
     
  18. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    You said to much recycled : /. But I changed back and thanks doode
     
  19. iMino

    iMino Well-Known Member

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    Oh and "Whoever Color (Omega Red is an Xmen character :confused:) to be this badass who made this scroll instead of an exo like the others because he doesnt/cant exo or some **** whatever." damn I wish could read that english.Who ever that badass is I hope he see this statement and hope he realize he a badass
     

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